Alyssa: Prompt 45 was very personal and whenever you write such a revealing piece, voice inevitably comes out. You have two speakers in this prompt, there was you over a year ago who seemed like the scope of the project was overcoming your excitement. Then there was you now who was clear minded and both relieved and excited. Both of the voices were excellent. "graophics" was a good opinion piece without knowing too much about the subject matter. Your stance was clearly stated and backed up with examples, your thought that graphic comics may be a better medium was intriguing. Good good.
Chelsee: "Sparky" Your prompt reminds me why I love people so much, aren't they just peachy? In any case, you do a swell job of changing the tone in the piece. First, it's about how your job has seeped into your normal life, then it morphs into the injustices of working. Well played.. " Graphic Novels vs. Comics" You defended your stance well, that you would enjoy to read graphic novels more. Through your argument, I believe you may have leaned towards the graphic novel being an swell medium for literature. Bueano.
Leena: 'Prompt 45' This piece here definitely conveys the monotonous tone you were going for. Your voice is there and I didn't spot any errors. I liked the line "monotonous Hell" that be it. The next prompt, 49, you clearly state your position of graphic novels as a medium for writing, and that issue is a big 'negative ghostrider' for you. That said, your voice was jolly and structure was swell.
Vaya con dios.
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