Alyssa: Denim Expert: Prompt 34 - Despite the prompt being about fabric in clothing, my face did not glaze over while reading, it was actually enjoyable. You introduced the subject, then allowed your neighbor to carry the story from there. The paragraphs of your personal thoughts on the matter tied everything in nicely. Your next story was very sweet and nicely done. The tone was very personal throughout the piece and casts your siblings in an extremely positive light. The last paragraph, about a bit of personal exploration, made a great impact creating a sense of individualism without negating any of your "idols".
Chelsee: "hard core wrapper" - I found this piece very entertaining, mostly because you are so committed to the perfect wrap while I normally put a gift in a bag and call it a day. The style was smooth and flowed well. I felt your voice came through with the excitement the piece conveyed. "The President" This was nicely done and, like our reading about Rudolph, managed to remain apolitical throughout the writing. Your voice and personality come through with this prompt and really adds to the prompt.
Leena: Did not complete assignments.
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